On the Spot Carwash and Detailing

Welcome ladies and gentlemen to my business proposal.  Before I describe my business I would like to tell you a few things about me.  My name is Francisco Carbone and I am 24 years old.  I graduated from American Academy in 2007 and since then have attended Broward College, McFatter Technical School and most recently, the Dan Marino Campus Entrepreneural program.  I have a language based learning disability that has impacted my ability to learn, which was diagnosed at age 4, and has made it very difficult to successfully complete many of the post secondary programs I have tried; that is until the Dan Marino Campus program.  The Entrepreneurship program has helped me to organize and plan my dream, which is to own my own mobile car wash business.  When I began the program, I was told that funds would be available to fund the best business plan. My goal was to aggressively learn about start up businesses and become the student with the best realistic business plan. I worked very hard to research and learn the car wash business, even taking a carwashing job significantly far from home, in an effort to learn the business. I created a business proposal, an accompanying powerpoint presentation, and presented it to a panel of judges.  I was told my presentation was outstanding and was told they would  invest if they had funds.  Unfortunately, this is where the problem began.  When I inquired about the funding available for the winning plan, I was told there was no funding available and that I had misunderstood.  I know I did not misunderstand and have confirmed this with other students.  Imagine my dismay, all this work and in the end to be told there was no funding. This is where you come in. I need to fund the start up of my company. On the Spot Car Wash and Detailng is a premium mobile hand car wash and detailing company that will come to your home or business and provide you with the best carwash and/or detailing in town. I am willing to exceed your expectations while providing outstanding customer service with a smile.  Your funds will help me to purchase a used van, all the necessay equipment for a carwash and detaling service and any other necessary start up costs.