Movie script needs a final polish for Hollywood.

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My movie script needs two or three more Judges' Feedback from PAGE Awards so I can make it the best possible to send it in to their 2020 competition, get noticed by Hollywood writers, managers, producers or industry execs and hopefully one day make this feature film. I have already sent it in 3 times to be reviewed by their industry experts and the latest feedback was VERY positive "This is an excellent script." and can be seen on my Facebook page. I am now ready to send it back with the suggested corrections/changes made. The funds will be used to pay for this feedback. This script is the culmination of over a year's worth of work, dreams, sacrifice, study, worry, and self doubt. Your donation will help me achieve a dream that I have worked very hard for. I have done everything I know how to do; now I need a little help.